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ID | Category | Severity | Reproducibility | Date Submitted | Last Update | ||||
0007537 | [Squeak] Morphic | text | always | 05-21-10 16:51 | 02-06-11 23:48 | ||||
Reporter | seandenigris | View Status | public | ||||||
Assigned To | seandenigris | ||||||||
Priority | normal | Resolution | fixed | ||||||
Status | closed | Product Version | trunk | ||||||
Summary | 0007537: Suggestions and grammatical fixes to "The Squeak User Interface" window. | ||||||||
Description |
Grammar fixes: * "Projects *are* can be used to change quickly from one task to another" should be "Projects can be used to change quickly from one task to another" * "Halos allow complex graphical objects to be explored--or" -> "Halos allow complex graphical objects to be explored -- or" (although I think the double dash looks funny, used in the last paragraph too) * "The Squeak UI has some unusual elements that you may not have seen before. Here is" should be two spaces before "Here is" like the rest of the text i.e. "The Squeak UI has some unusual elements that you may not have seen before. Here is" Suggestions: * "Each project maintains its set of windows, plus its own set of Smalltalk changes and its own screen color depth." - Someone who doesn't know what a project is, probably won't know what is meant by "set of Smalltalk changes," or "screen color depth." I think they should either be explained or removed. * "In a morphic project, cmd-click (alt-click)..." This is confusing (and maybe inaccurate). I would put something like "cmd-click (Mac), or alt-click (Windows)," if that's what is meant, and add either "by default" or " (can be changed in preferences) |
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Additional Information | Is there a way to submit fixes like this on live objects? I figure out how to do something like upload to inbox. Thanks. | ||||||||
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